Madeline’s object piece was about a necklace she bought that
represented her commitment, and love for her boyfriend, Morgan. It was rose
gold and had an “M&M” on it to stand for Madeline and Morgan. She wore it
every day until it was so worn out that she could no longer wear it. Now, it
dangles on the rear view mirror of her car and she admires it every day.
"Greetings, Madeline. I love the line "looking for
nothing, finding everything." I often feel this way when I go shopping
with my little sister. I admire your commitment and passion, and I love that
even though you can't wear the necklace anymore, it's still beautiful to you
and you haven't given up on it. Morgan is a lucky guy. Thank you for sharing
this fantastic piece."
Riley’s object piece what about her drumline competitions,
and the time Kickapoo won 8th in the world! She recalls a time that
her team prayed before their debut, and later returns to the very same spot for
the finals. She exposes the comical and nerve-racking struggles that come with
competitions away from home, such as having to such all their instruments into
a bus! Yikes! She is saddened that some of her senior teammates will be leaving,
because they’re such a great group of drummers and friends.
"Hello, Riley! I can definitely relate with the having to
stuff instruments onto a bus. When we have Orchestra contests, it's a huge
hassle to pack the basses and cellos. Love that you remember the spot you
prayed in, the first time. I often walk or drive past a place that reminds me
of something dear to my heart. Eighth in the World is a huge deal!
Congratulations! I'm very proud of our Kickapoo drumline and I look forward to
seeing what great things they do in the future. Thanks for sharing!"
Jesse’s piece is the most difficult to summarize, and I’m not
sure that I completely understand it. I presume that he is telling us about his
“third eye” and the good and bad that come with it. He presents his object as a
mystery, and leaves it open to interpretation. It seems almost supernatural it
me. He comments that this object lives inside of him, and very few people have
experienced it other than him. His friend “T” is one of these people. He talks
about how is can be a nuisance and can weigh heavy on his shoulders, and
sometimes it can make him feel empowered and gives him insight. It’s a very
confusing topic.
"Salutations, Jesse. Your opening line does a great job of
drawing your reader in. "This object is a mystery." What could THAT
mean? I'm bemused. I like how this piece makes me think, and how it challenges
me. I had to read it a few times to wrap my head around it. Your question at
the end reminds me of the mirror in Harry Potter that shows you your deepest
desires. I recall Dumbledore telling Harry that the happiest man in the world
would look upon the mirror and see only himself, exactly the way he is. Thank
you for adding such a dynamic piece."